WALT:to think outside the box and use our creativity skills to create a picture in our heads. what I enjoyed: is that I can finish off my task anytime e.g during reading time or maths time and I can do my work freely. what I learnt: is that created something using your imagination is very hard because you have one idea then you think about another.
hay Simon,
ReplyDeleteI would just want to say great work on your writing i really like it, next time when you are doing your stick sentences highlight your interesting word. Keep up the great work and i am looking forward seeing more of your work.
Hi Simon,
ReplyDeleteI really like your slideshow on your writing. I like how you used your imagination in this slideshow. Next time you could add some punctuation,other then that your slideshow was nice
hi guys,
ReplyDeleteits simon thanks for the helpful feedback and I will try and use it next time. I will try and comment on yours and give you guys strong feedback. but again thanks for the good feedback