Is it wrong to fight?
What do you think? Do you agree or disagree? Are there ideas to support both sides of this topic?
Write to persuade your reader of your ideas.
Think about:
what your reader needs to know about the topic
how you are going to introduce the topic
the order of your ideas and how you link them
what to include in your summary.
Remember to:
choose your words carefully
take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.
In my opinion I recommend that people should be allowed to fight,
Firstly I would like to say that people should have the right to fight when it is needed Because of the way people start fights. People start fights when they are getting bullied or been said something. So that leads to arguments or just straight fighting.
Secondly there would be lots of bullies if fighting wasn’t allowed. When fighting is used people usually use it for defence or just fun fighting. There was a boxer who lost control when a fan said something rude, he lost control because of the way the fan said it and what he said. I don't know why he was in prison, he was standing up for himself.
Fighting is way for people to not get bullied anymore, it's a way that people can defend themselves from bullies. It's also a technique that scare the person trying to fight you. Let's say there were two guys coming to fight u and ure teacher told u to never fight again but the two guys were hitting you. You can’t just stand there and stay stuff like stop it I don’t like it because they are bullies and if you watch bullying movies they never stop bullying.
Thirdly people say fighting is bad and a bad habit but what they don’t know is that some people use the technique of fighting to defend themselves. When someone is fighting they are not fighting because the other guy said thank you or please they are fighting for a purpose. The guy probably said something wrong and then the other guy got angry who knows. But people don't only use the technique but they use it for a purpose.
To some people fight because it is a sport like boxing or ufc. They do these sport because of the fun they have of punching and the kicking. Some people might not like ponies and ballerinas but then you see some people might be really into boxing. They might be physical people not emotion people Like joseph parker he is the man well I think he is the man. He didn’t get the world heavyweight title because he didn’t fight when he was younger he would of had a fight maybe two or more times. When I hear joseph parker fighting I see boxing gloves and a question mark. Your wondering why a question mark, the question mark is for the person who joseph parker is going to smash.
Lastly I would like to say that when I fight trust me you don’t want to fight me because well you don’t. I only fight when there is a purpose to fight. Just like sonny bill he only fights when it is needed. he also fights because he is comfortable fighting. Fighting can lead u to a career if you fight only for good not bad.
In my perspective I really think fighting should be allowed at school and outside on school because on the reason people fight.
Thursday, 31 May 2018
wanted poster
WALT: to make a wanted poster for ben hall and connect it to our topic for writing.
what I learnt: was that ben hall was killed by his best mate
what I enjoyed: was drawing ben hall
Wednesday, 30 May 2018
the unwanted kid
The unwanted kid.
There once was a kid who’s name was sione,
He was made fun of because he was allergic to macceronie,
He woke up and pretended that he was sick,
But his mum did not fall for it and warned him with the broomstick,
He was at school just doing everything and mucking around,
We all of a sudden one of the bullies give him a great pound,
When he opens his eyes with a great big shock,
He sees bullies around him like a massive sheep flock,
Sione tells the bully leader to take his crew and go away, But he was nodding his head and said you have to pay, They kicked him punched him and pushed him to the ground, And when it was english time he was nowhere to be found, He was trying to stand up near the cross country track, But the memories of his mum and dad kept coming back, The principal found sione dead flat on the floor, And when they were talking the bully said sione was the one that swore, At that moment sione was angry and wanted to give him a big hiding, But he thought to himself “I don’t want the kid to start crying”, Sione was tired of being bullied all his life, Because in the future he wanted the prettiest girl in school to be his wife,
The bell rang and sione knew it was time for round three, And he was finding a good hiding spot behind the big tree, But the bully was playing dumb and was setting up for a fight, And when sione looked behind the tree he was out of sight, The next minute he is holding his jersey against the tree, And sione was yelling please please please let me free, The bully wasn’t listening and was going in for a punch, Sione got out his money and gave him his lunch,
The next afternoon the bullies surrounded sione near the gym, They pulled out scissors and grabbed his hair and was about to give him a trim, Sione really loved his hair it was like panda bears cuddling gold, And when they showed him the mirror he was fully bold, Know this was the bit that sione got angry, He took of his top and ate a bunch of candy, The bully was just staring and started laughing, Sione was betting them up one by one it looked like they were dancing, Know sione's future fiance was standing by the corner, And when he licked his lips and looked away he was getting stronger, The leader of the bullies was ready for a competition, And they started fighting fighting and the bully was close to his submission,
Sione was shaking because all the girls were watching his big fight, And the bully was becoming scared of sione so he thought he could be polite, But sione showed no mercy and wacked him in the head, He fell on the ground and acted like he was dead, Sione was victorious and won his fight, When he was walking he felt himself have a great big fright, He won with a great smile on his face, And walked around school looking like he owned the place, So that was the story about how sione got stronger, And the bullies will never bully him again or get closer, And in the end he got his girl and that’s what he wanted, And know sione is 64 and that moment is still not forgotten,
what I enjoyed: was making the ballad rhyme
what I learnt: was trying to think of interesting words
Sione tells the bully leader to take his crew and go away, But he was nodding his head and said you have to pay, They kicked him punched him and pushed him to the ground, And when it was english time he was nowhere to be found, He was trying to stand up near the cross country track, But the memories of his mum and dad kept coming back, The principal found sione dead flat on the floor, And when they were talking the bully said sione was the one that swore, At that moment sione was angry and wanted to give him a big hiding, But he thought to himself “I don’t want the kid to start crying”, Sione was tired of being bullied all his life, Because in the future he wanted the prettiest girl in school to be his wife,
The bell rang and sione knew it was time for round three, And he was finding a good hiding spot behind the big tree, But the bully was playing dumb and was setting up for a fight, And when sione looked behind the tree he was out of sight, The next minute he is holding his jersey against the tree, And sione was yelling please please please let me free, The bully wasn’t listening and was going in for a punch, Sione got out his money and gave him his lunch,
The next afternoon the bullies surrounded sione near the gym, They pulled out scissors and grabbed his hair and was about to give him a trim, Sione really loved his hair it was like panda bears cuddling gold, And when they showed him the mirror he was fully bold, Know this was the bit that sione got angry, He took of his top and ate a bunch of candy, The bully was just staring and started laughing, Sione was betting them up one by one it looked like they were dancing, Know sione's future fiance was standing by the corner, And when he licked his lips and looked away he was getting stronger, The leader of the bullies was ready for a competition, And they started fighting fighting and the bully was close to his submission,
Sione was shaking because all the girls were watching his big fight, And the bully was becoming scared of sione so he thought he could be polite, But sione showed no mercy and wacked him in the head, He fell on the ground and acted like he was dead, Sione was victorious and won his fight, When he was walking he felt himself have a great big fright, He won with a great smile on his face, And walked around school looking like he owned the place, So that was the story about how sione got stronger, And the bullies will never bully him again or get closer, And in the end he got his girl and that’s what he wanted, And know sione is 64 and that moment is still not forgotten,
what I enjoyed: was making the ballad rhyme
what I learnt: was trying to think of interesting words
Thursday, 24 May 2018
My not so rugby game
My not so rugby game.
On saturday the 28th me simon and my brother sanele were in for a ride of a lifetime.
It was 8:00 and the whistle was blown I was given the ball and I ran at one of the guys with a serious face and he moved but I still got tackled from another guy. It was phase 5 and we had to kick the ball so the first five kicked it to the biggest guy(like why the biggest guy why not the small half back)he ran it to me and it was shoulder to shoulder and we collided like two bulls ripping out there hearts. It was solid and guess what he wasn’t the biggest guy now because I was, yeah, I was the king of the hill now.
Well not exactly I was the second best there was one guy just that one guy that I couldn’t get pass. He was like the hulk but two times bigger, he was like flash but two times slower. This 13 year old boy was like hungry for the ball most times I thought he was alien. It was there ball and they were getting ready to give it to him, my teammate was patting my back and whispered in my ear “you got this fella” but what they didn’t know is that I was peeing my pants. He tapped the ball and ran it straight to me I was holding my ground and he was like 3 or 5 metres away from me and my teammates come at the front on me and take him down for me I was looking at the guy like a boss. He stood up and tried to strangle me (pause) you're probably wondering why he was trying to strangle me well before he stood up I kicked him right in the stomach but not too hard so don't worry and(action)so he stood up tried to strangle me and I just wacked him in the jaw and I got yellow carded like what the heck might as well make it a red card or even a purple card if there is a purple card. I was so angry at the time because it was just one punch he tried to strangle me that's worse, I could of fainted or need my parents isn’t that a smart idea but even if I fainted I would want to faint in a cool way like the actors on movies slowly but fast and then BOOM vanish and the next thing you know is that they are living again.
Later that afternoon I was puffed and tired and I turn around and it was only half time( at that moment I actually thought I was going to faint) I was running with the ball and my mom was yelling from the sideline so loud that she was standing by herself I was laughing to myself and I managed to drop the ball. It was 37-32 to us and it was one point away from winning the game and we were kicking of to the opponents side and they gave the ball to the best player to kick off guess who the best player was? Yep u got it, it was me your number one star simon uliano youngest player of the all blacks. When I was setting up to kick off I was trying to calculate the wind like moana well she was going to get maui if you have seen it then you will know what I mean well anyways I was measuring the wind and how fast it was going and then the whistle was blown once again and this time I was aiming for the corner where the smallest player of the other team was. I gave the ball a big kick and booted it to the wrong side and it ended up going to the other side on the rugby team.
what I enjoyed: was remembering that day and actual reliving it in my thoughts.
what I learnt: is that writing a holiday recount is not an easy thing.
On saturday the 28th me simon and my brother sanele were in for a ride of a lifetime.
It was 8:00 and the whistle was blown I was given the ball and I ran at one of the guys with a serious face and he moved but I still got tackled from another guy. It was phase 5 and we had to kick the ball so the first five kicked it to the biggest guy(like why the biggest guy why not the small half back)he ran it to me and it was shoulder to shoulder and we collided like two bulls ripping out there hearts. It was solid and guess what he wasn’t the biggest guy now because I was, yeah, I was the king of the hill now.
Well not exactly I was the second best there was one guy just that one guy that I couldn’t get pass. He was like the hulk but two times bigger, he was like flash but two times slower. This 13 year old boy was like hungry for the ball most times I thought he was alien. It was there ball and they were getting ready to give it to him, my teammate was patting my back and whispered in my ear “you got this fella” but what they didn’t know is that I was peeing my pants. He tapped the ball and ran it straight to me I was holding my ground and he was like 3 or 5 metres away from me and my teammates come at the front on me and take him down for me I was looking at the guy like a boss. He stood up and tried to strangle me (pause) you're probably wondering why he was trying to strangle me well before he stood up I kicked him right in the stomach but not too hard so don't worry and(action)so he stood up tried to strangle me and I just wacked him in the jaw and I got yellow carded like what the heck might as well make it a red card or even a purple card if there is a purple card. I was so angry at the time because it was just one punch he tried to strangle me that's worse, I could of fainted or need my parents isn’t that a smart idea but even if I fainted I would want to faint in a cool way like the actors on movies slowly but fast and then BOOM vanish and the next thing you know is that they are living again.
Later that afternoon I was puffed and tired and I turn around and it was only half time( at that moment I actually thought I was going to faint) I was running with the ball and my mom was yelling from the sideline so loud that she was standing by herself I was laughing to myself and I managed to drop the ball. It was 37-32 to us and it was one point away from winning the game and we were kicking of to the opponents side and they gave the ball to the best player to kick off guess who the best player was? Yep u got it, it was me your number one star simon uliano youngest player of the all blacks. When I was setting up to kick off I was trying to calculate the wind like moana well she was going to get maui if you have seen it then you will know what I mean well anyways I was measuring the wind and how fast it was going and then the whistle was blown once again and this time I was aiming for the corner where the smallest player of the other team was. I gave the ball a big kick and booted it to the wrong side and it ended up going to the other side on the rugby team.
what I enjoyed: was remembering that day and actual reliving it in my thoughts.
what I learnt: is that writing a holiday recount is not an easy thing.
angles
WALT: to understand what our learning task was and really know how to work out straight angles and obtuse angles. what I enjoyed was making the pop quiz and putting the gifs in. what I learnt is how to measure a protractor with the paperwork equations.
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