persuasive writing

Is it wrong to fight? What do you think? Do you agree or disagree? Are there ideas to support both sides of this topic? Write to persuade your reader of your ideas. Think about: what your reader needs to know about the topic how you are going to introduce the topic the order of your ideas and how you link them what to include in your summary. Remember to: choose your words carefully take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

In my opinion I recommend that people should be allowed to fight, Firstly I would like to say that people should have the right to fight when it is needed Because of the way people start fights. People start fights when they are getting bullied or been said something. So that leads to arguments or just straight fighting. Secondly there would be lots of bullies if fighting wasn’t allowed. When fighting is used people usually use it for defence or just fun fighting. There was a boxer who lost control when a fan said something rude, he lost control because of the way the fan said it and what he said. I don't know why he was in prison, he was standing up for himself.

Fighting is way for people to not get bullied anymore, it's a way that people can defend themselves from bullies. It's also a technique that scare the person trying to fight you. Let's say there were two guys coming to fight u and ure teacher told u to never fight again but the two guys were hitting you. You can’t just stand there and stay stuff like stop it I don’t like it because they are bullies and if you watch bullying movies they never stop bullying. Thirdly people say fighting is bad and a bad habit but what they don’t know is that some people use the technique of fighting to defend themselves. When someone is fighting they are not fighting because the other guy said thank you or please they are fighting for a purpose. The guy probably said something wrong and then the other guy got angry who knows. But people don't only use the technique but they use it for a purpose.

To some people fight because it is a sport like boxing or ufc. They do these sport because of the fun they have of punching and the kicking. Some people might not like ponies and ballerinas but then you see some people might be really into boxing. They might be physical people not emotion people Like joseph parker he is the man well I think he is the man. He didn’t get the world heavyweight title because he didn’t fight when he was younger he would of had a fight maybe two or more times. When I hear joseph parker fighting I see boxing gloves and a question mark. Your wondering why a question mark, the question mark is for the person who joseph parker is going to smash.

 Lastly I would like to say that when I fight trust me you don’t want to fight me because well you don’t. I only fight when there is a purpose to fight. Just like sonny bill he only fights when it is needed. he also fights because he is comfortable fighting. Fighting can lead u to a career if you fight only for good not bad. In my perspective I really think fighting should be allowed at school and outside on school because on the reason people fight.