Hello Simon, i like the way you have put in a lot of effort in this work. i also like that i have a big family too but i have a family of 13, i have 3 brothers and 9 sisters. Next time you could put some more color. bye Nicholas
Hi Simon, I like the way you explained about your self. Maybe next time you should explained more about what's your favourite Musician, T.V. Show etc. Nice Job.
Hi Simon, I like your slide but you should start your name with a capital letter, not simon but Simon, and also on slide 3 you should start Jesus with a capital letter. But other than those 2 mistakes your slide was good!
Well done Simon I liked the pictures you used in your slide maybe you could use more color.
ReplyDeleteWell done Simon! I liked everything in this slideshow, but next time I think you could use more colours.
ReplyDeleteHello Simon,
ReplyDeletei like the way you have put in a lot of effort in this work. i also like that i have a big family too but i have a family of 13, i have 3 brothers and 9 sisters. Next time you could put some more color. bye
Nicholas
Hello Simon I liked this sideshow next time could you tell me about you e.g your TV show
ReplyDeleteHi Simon Its me Moni I like how you laid out your all about me maybe next time you could Write about you e.g your favourite t.v show.
ReplyDeleteHi Simon,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you explained about your self. Maybe next time you should explained more about what's your favourite Musician, T.V. Show etc. Nice Job.
Hi Simon,
ReplyDeleteI like your slide but you should start your name with a capital letter, not simon but Simon, and also on slide 3 you should start Jesus with a capital letter. But other than those 2 mistakes your slide was good!