World war 1 heroes.
As they fire their guns in the blizzery morning they are rushing to devour their enemies. I on the other hand have been placed inside the trenches with my good friend Freda. Freda is confused and blue because she is hearing all these scary noises so it frightens her.
The next day Freda started to grow and grow it was like she wasn’t scared anymore. So the time came. It was time to stop hiding in the trenches and run to battle. So I asked God to bless me and Freda to survive this war and go back home and see our family members. I heard general Zion say “let’s go boys” Freda jumped in my bag and stayed hidden until she could hear nothing. As the day gone past the sun started to come out, it was like living in the sun. it was melting hot, I couldn’t breathe my lungs were bursting with flames. I knew I had to get over it but it was just too hot so I had to fight through it. Finally we made it near the war zone ‘BOOM’ to be continued... 
WALT- describe how animals play a part in world wars and why?
we are reading a book called the Anzac puppy and we had to choose a character to write about and I chose Freda and we had to use a flashback and show not tell, the challenging bit was putting it in our own perspective.
we are reading a book called the Anzac puppy and we had to choose a character to write about and I chose Freda and we had to use a flashback and show not tell, the challenging bit was putting it in our own perspective.
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