Holidays.
One Afternoon me and my brothers head out to Hoyts for a relaxing rest. We are near Riccarton mall and I am excited to step out onto the floor and dance because to shake the fun out of me not because I am a crazy child. I stepped out of the car and felt a gentle breeze hit me , I didn’t really care as I had two layers of clothes it was all fine.
We settled in our seats while my brother gets our popcorn, m&m x2, small popcorn x2 this was all for me. The movie was Galaxy of the Guardians 2 it was boring my brother kept annoying me . My older brother didn't care I was getting so angry, While my brother was sleeping I took 30 or the whole pack of his m&ms and ate them all to myself. You guys might call that stealing but I call it ‘REVENGE’.
He woke up and said “where's my M&M’s I just looked away and didn’t really care about what he was talking about because I was too busy eating his M&M. He finally got over it and later on the movie was over so we left the Hoyts. My brother was still mad and I was happy.
The movies was so cool and there was lot’s of people there, there was times when people laughed and there were times when it got awkward, I felt like there was another bit to the movie but who knows it could be over.
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