I really liked the way you used an 'emaze' for your Inquiry. These reminded me of when children in the news are experiencing bad treatment. To improve your work in the near future you could add: Interesting Facts and more explanation about your inquiry. Anyway, you're Inquiry is amazing!
Hello Simon! I really enjoyed your D.L.O. Something a really liked about it was that you've put effort into making it, Something I think you need to work on next time is putting more effort into the information more than slide.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you used an 'emaze' for your Inquiry. These reminded me of when children in the news are experiencing bad treatment. To improve your work in the near future you could add: Interesting Facts and more explanation about your inquiry. Anyway, you're Inquiry is amazing!
Hello Simon!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your D.L.O. Something a really liked about it was that you've put effort into making it, Something I think you need to work on next time is putting more effort into the information more than slide.
thanks for your great comment i try everything in my power to make it better next time thanks
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