I liked the way you divided your explanation into boxes. I also liked the way you added images. Maybe next time you could make the font size bigger to make it easier to read. Overall, Nice Work!
Hi Simon, I like how you added the pictures to show what accordion is. I also like how you added a lot of information. Maybe next time you could do your own drawing or make the font more bigger, so it's easy to read for other people. But, you did a good job. Keep it up!
Hi Simon, i like how u put all that info on there well done also maby you could say how many keys are on there and basses to i think you did a grate job keep it up - naiema
Hello Simon, It is nice to see you've put in a lot of information about the accordian. Next time, maybe you could add someone playing the accordion? You've done very well. I look forward to your future work.
Hi Simon,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you divided your explanation into boxes. I also liked the way you added images. Maybe next time you could make the font size bigger to make it easier to read. Overall, Nice Work!
Hi Simon,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added the pictures to show what accordion is. I also like how you added a lot of information. Maybe next time you could do your own drawing or make the font more bigger, so it's easy to read for other people. But, you did a good job. Keep it up!
Hi Simon,
ReplyDeletei like how u put all that info on there well done
also maby you could say how many keys are on there and basses to
i think you did a grate job keep it up
- naiema
Hello Simon,
ReplyDeleteIt is nice to see you've put in a lot of information about the accordian.
Next time, maybe you could add someone playing the accordion? You've done very well. I look forward to your future work.