Should cellphones be banned in schools?
In my opinion I think cellphones should not be banned in schools and here are my reasons…
First of all kids need their cellphones just in case they get into a situation that needs the police than they can call them. If you are late home and need a ride home than you could call your parents to pick you up or even an uber. Having cellphones in school are a big help in our everyday lives eg...
- Could be used as a calculator
- A weapon to use if needed
- A treat for little ones
- Could play music and work to keep your brain going
- Search up words you don't probably know
- Watch the news everyday
- Calling the cops if needed
Second of all phones can be used as a helping tool at school and outside of school because let's say you are doing a test and you don't know the meaning of a word than you could quickly jump onto your phone and check out what the phone means(some of you guys reading this are probably wondering if it is cheating? Nope it's not I would rather call it using my common sense there's a difference). Another cases you could use your phone for taking photos in places.
Hi Simon,
ReplyDeleteThis piece of writing is great, and I like how you have the reasons why it should be banned. something that you could work on is adding some more information to your writing and I also found it hard to read because there was something wrong with your blog. But Over all great job.
thanks moni for the brilliant comment I will try and fix my blog next time and also add some more information into it and make it stand out more with some subtitles like your one. thanks for the comment
DeleteWell done Simon, you have made a great start. I would like to see you work harder to finish this. You have clearly stated your opinion in the opening statement. Great work. You need to ensure that you use the correct structure, this can be found on our site and on the wall. Also some facts to back up your bullet points would be great.
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